diff --git a/frontend/app/about/page.tsx b/frontend/app/about/page.tsx
index c929106..c181996 100644
--- a/frontend/app/about/page.tsx
+++ b/frontend/app/about/page.tsx
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ export default function AboutPage() {
             <section className="text-center space-y-4">
                 <h1 className="text-4xl font-extrabold tracking-tight sm:text-5xl">About Elmeg</h1>
                 <p className="text-xl text-muted-foreground max-w-2xl mx-auto">
-                    The ultimate community-driven archive dedicated to preserving the history and evolution of the band <span className="text-foreground font-semibold">Goose</span>.
+                    A comprehensive community-driven archive dedicated to preserving the history and evolution of the band <span className="text-foreground font-semibold">Goose</span>.
                 </p>
             </section>
 
@@ -22,9 +22,9 @@ export default function AboutPage() {
                             <h2 className="text-2xl font-bold">Our Mission</h2>
                         </div>
                         <p className="text-lg leading-relaxed text-muted-foreground">
-                            Elmeg was founded by fans, for fans. We believe that every performance is a unique piece of history.
-                            Our goal is to document every show, every setlist, and every note, providing a comprehensive
-                            platform for the community to explore the band's legacy.
+                            Elmeg is a collaborative effort, growing organically through the contributions of the flock.
+                            We believe that every performance is a shared experience. Our goal is to build a mycelium-like network
+                            of information, where every setlist, note, and rating helps others discover the magic of the music.
                         </p>
                     </CardContent>
                 </Card>
@@ -91,6 +91,6 @@ export default function AboutPage() {
                     "Built by the flock, for the flock."
                 </p>
             </section>
-        </div>
+        </div >
     )
 }
diff --git a/frontend/app/page.tsx b/frontend/app/page.tsx
index 94fa145..a548331 100644
--- a/frontend/app/page.tsx
+++ b/frontend/app/page.tsx
@@ -89,9 +89,9 @@ export default async function Home() {
           Elmeg
         </h1>
         <p className="max-w-[600px] text-lg text-muted-foreground">
-          The ultimate community archive for Goose history.
+          A comprehensive community-driven archive for Goose history.
           <br />
-          Discover shows, rate performances, and find the best jams.
+          Discover shows, share ratings, and explore the music together.
         </p>
         <div className="flex gap-4">
           <Link href="/performances">
@@ -261,6 +261,6 @@ export default async function Home() {
           <p className="text-sm text-muted-foreground">Watch full shows and songs</p>
         </Link>
       </section>
-    </div>
+    </div >
   )
 }